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dragonfly page 4 by sureya dragonfly page 4 by sureya
a friend of mine saw this full pic of azze & said..." that's deffinately a girl"... akhhh...!!!! y don't he juz take a piece of rock & bump it my head... @____@"

*this page begins 2 show signs of laziness...

okie...the dialogues...

panel 1
boy - ..........

panel 2
boy - where r your drawing stuff...?

panel 3
boy - ......?!

panel 4
boy - (arghh...no...y now...please...not now...yu will find out... )
girl - azze...

panel 5
girl - my mom found the letter...
boy - ........
girl - she's angry with me...she said that drawing comics doesn't promise a good future...
boy - so... u want 2 stop drawing...?
girl - i don't know...
boy - but...i thought u love 2 draw comic...

panel 6
girl - ......
i do...but...

panel 7
girl - what should i do azze...?
boy - ...........
( i'm sorry yu...i can't hold it anymore...)

panel 8
boy - (i must go now... )
girl - azze...?

panel 9
boy -( i don't want u 2 c me like this...)

ahhhh....i don't care anymore...juz let 'em b bishie...i'll improve in time...

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deadpan Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2004
I really like your tree. I know, that's a weird thing to say, isn't it? :XD: The storyline's getting tighter. :o I can't wait to read more about it! :D
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sureya Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
i was scolded back in school by my art teacher coz my tree sucked... ^^"
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lazydragon Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2004
:nod:

ni cerita shojo-ai kut.... :XD:
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sureya Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
ha...ha... shojo ai...kalu cam2 gerenti X lepas nyer...
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Tears-of-Angels Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2004  Hobbyist
your great! and so much emotion in this! i hope every thing is ok! ^^... as always, i love your stuff!
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
*isk...

i'm touched...thank u so much...
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Daiya Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2004   Digital Artist
Eeeee..... >_< I hate it when people can't tell whether it's a guy or girl... flat chest or no flat chest, broad shoulders or no shoulders. Buat sakit hati jer. I just experienced 3 different people asking whether my charac was male or female today and in exasperation, I crumpled the paper.

But aside from ranting, (XD) I really like how you manage to make the hair REALLY look like it's in layers or locks.
If I try to ink hair, it always goes unsteady or too thick... blah.... =_= *dies*
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
ya...memang...sakit hati gila...depa suruh ubah camni la...cam2 la...pas ubah dah jadi pelik...X masuk lak ngan my girls...takkan nak buat the girls cute...tapi guysnyer tall...bulky...muscly...like that...tak sepadan la...

i'll work hard 2 find a better style 4 my guys...

thank u...apoh said my drawing too much hair... should concertrate on other parts 2...
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wolfinus Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2004
:faint:
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sureya Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
^^"
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Zue Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004  Professional Digital Artist
Alamak, you touched teh sore spot :XD: hahaha.... same lah, my parents pun nak ikutkan tak kasi kita draw @__@;;;;;;;
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Zue Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004  Professional Digital Artist
Eh, forgot to mention XP I :heart::heart::heart: how you draw hairrrr~~~ :worship:
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
komik 2 memang terselit sedikit luahan perasaan from me...

y can't i draw guys... U____U"
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syaiz Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004
oh..yang ini ke...alamak...^^; ahah..sorry..yapi..em kite pun a lil bit confused gak..T_T yang mane satu azze??..yang baju belang tu ker?..rasernyer kan kalu buat rambut dier pendek skit...nampak tak berape bishie sangat...sorry...memnag terlampau bishie...cute!!!!!!X3
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
memang terover skit masa lukis gambo yg ni...nak lukis balik dah X smpat...hari ni nak hanto...

biar je leh...

*running away from reality...
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syaiz Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2004
ele...maintain lawa jugak kan?..>.< ..bukan nyer cam kite...satu hari bleh lukis berape banyak?..asal tak kene reject ok lar...tu pun dah tahap tok guru dah tu...ok..nak sambung baca Death Note..kalu tunggu Kreko lambat sangat..so kite gi download..best woo..tak sabar nak tahu what happen next..so c ya!..:hug:
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
ha...ha...lawa...i don't want my guys 2 b lawa...U____U"

kite lukis lambat tahap siput nyer... 1 page @ pic amik masa lebih kurang 2 ke 3 hari nak siap...

balik2 asyik kena sound ngan apoh je...

i love death note...L's so cute...mata dia cam mata kucing...
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syaiz Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2004
betul..tapi kalau yang baik punye lagi kiut!!!...comel sangat..innocent..X3..

ele tau tak kite pro akak..ramai yang kate lukisan akak cantikkkk sangat..ader yang sangup beli komik kalau jual...tapi sayangnye hanya ader kat sini je kan...detail sedetail detailnye tu yang ambik masa tu kan??..ala kesiannye..:hug:
meh kite sound apoh balik nak? XD...lawak jer..kang mampus kene ngan peminat Apoh kang..TT__TT.... :hug:
take care!!! jangan asyik lukis ngan belajo jer...jage kesihatan yerk!
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
lukis 2 kalu concertrate & cukup masa 1 hari leh siap 1 page...detail rambut 2 memang lama nak buat...tapi part paling senang sekali...masalahnya sibuk gila...maklum la kita ni pelajar biz...walaupun sekarang study dah habis...tapi nak kena work training lak...dok opis 9 to 5...lagi la takde masa nak melukis...

*letih... blur...blur...
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syaiz Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2004
kesiannye Nut'z...jaga kesihatan yek...nanti kalo sakit sape yg susah...waahh...adulthood sungguh menakutkan...T__T

rasernyer rambut dier detail sangat..kalu kurangkan skit pun tak pe...:hug:
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sureya Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
isk...ada gak org care bout me...

Xpe...i'm always sihat & kuat...cuma penat je...XP

dah try...my hands X mau dengar arahan...ahhhhhhh....(lawak bodo jab... ^^)

my nex comic i'm doing a different style...
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sapphirez Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004
Uwaa.... my mom said that too... wait, my father too~ They said drawing comic tak jamin masa depan... But i do love drawing... T________T
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
went tru the same thing...memang sedih gila...

the story's fictional but i put a lot of my personal feelings & experience in it...
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dzulk9 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
Your panel wqas like that.... dialogs......nice.
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
..............? dunno what u mean by that...

thanx...
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dzulk9 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
Adalah maksud......cari kak mempanel komik secara dialog agak kemas dan teratur!
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
ya ka....? ha...ha...me asyik kena sound ngan apoh sebab my panelling lintang pukang...
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dzulk9 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
Lol maybelah!
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
i need more practice...
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dzulk9 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
Me too!
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sureya Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
^____^
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WeatheredAutomaton Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004
yeah...... looks ike a girl.. the folds in the shirt don't help

but when I saw that full body shot I was stunned, that's an awesome drawing!!
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WeatheredAutomaton Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004
it's a style thing is all...

try drawing more square-ish eyes and not keeping their bodies tucked in so tight. It's very feminine.


but style is style
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
U___U"

i have this problem with drawing guys...but thanx 4 the comment...
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Skecchu Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004
Hey.. you feeling any better? :)
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
*smile...

how can i feel sad when i have u 2 make me feel happy...

i'm okay... juz a bit lonely...but i'll survive...

mayb i got a bit 2 overdramatic when i wrote that journal... XP
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Skecchu Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004
lolz! actually.. it's ok to feel that way sometimes.. :) when i feel like that sometimes.. i take it all out on my drawings!! :) smile smile!!! mwuahahahah!!! :glomp:
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
ya...i was feeling bad that day...but i'm ok now...anyway...we never loose touch with each other...it's juz not having her around anymore...it feels a bit different...

when i feel bad i juz draw until i get a migrain...XP
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Skecchu Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004
lolz!!!
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rin2004 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004
wow thats really good
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sureya Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2004  Professional Traditional Artist
thanx...
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